Peanut Killer Part II Electric Boogaloo – Session 4

Peanut Butter Cup Heart
“Peanut Butter Cup Heart” by Bob.Fornal is licensed under CC BY-NC-SA 2.0

SUMMARY

Role

Screenwriter

Intention (SMART Goal)

By March 2nd, as part of my film team, I will explore the screenwriter’s skill pathway by following The Visual Story by Bruce Block and will have created scenes that use contrasted lighting to express the visual story structure of tone over the scenes of our Session 4 project.

PRE-PRODUCTION – INQUIRY

Leader(s) in the Field / Exemplary Work(s)

Stephen McFeely

Stephen McFeely was the screenwriter and producer for multiple big marvel movies including Infinity War, Endgame, The First Avenger, and Captain America: Civil War. His strengths lie in his use of tone. In the scene above the tone of the film is very dark when looking at the lighting, but when you listen to the dialogue, it becomes significantly less serious and more comedic. This styling of dialogue and lighting is scene in a lot of marvel movies and that’s what makes them standout from other superhero films.

Training Source(s)

The Visual Story by Bruce Block

Tone Notes:

  • Find a subject to focus on, no movement
  • color does not = tone
  • watch film in black and white to judge lighting work
  • hiding and revealing things
  • Communicating with other parts of the team to sculpt a tone
  • Controlling tone through the staging of film.

1:34 – Using a pitch deck to communicate a vision creatively to convey tone

Project Timeline

Pre – Production – February 14 – February 23rd

  1. Brainstorm ideas
  2. Create storyboard
  3. Create slideshow and share with all team members
  4. Write screenplay
  5. Decide on location and character roles
  6. Gather/make props, costumes, equipment

Production – February 23rd – February 28th

  1. Set up shots
  2. Prepare blocking for each scene
  3. Film all scenes
  4. Record all sounds/dialogue and create music

Post Production – February 28th – March 7

  1. Put all recordings for audio and video in shared Google Drive folder
  2. Label final shots
  3. Decide which scenes to keep, get rid of, or re-shoot
  4. Transfer audio and clips into Premiere Pro
  5. Put clips in order and make all edits
  6. Put audio in and sync up to video
  7. Make all finishing touches
  8. Export final film
  9. Add evidence to slideshow
  10. Present film and slideshow to the class and receive feedback

Proposed Budget

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PRODUCTION – ACTION

The (FILM, SOUND, or GAME Creation)

The Film

Skills Commentary

The Film Slideshow (Commentary)

POST-PRODUCTION – REFLECTION

21st Century Skills

Ways of Thinking (Creativity, Innovation, Critical Thinking, Problem Solving)

Ways of Thinking: One of the problems our team faced during this session was how we were going to approach the creation of the film. The original premise of this session was to recreate our film, but with a better visual story structure. Instead of doing that, we decided to create a sequel to the film before, which required significantly more pre-production and creative work, causing us to spend crunch time in production.

Ways of Working (Communication & Collaboration)

I think during production, we did a good job at communicating more most of the production. The difficulty of communication was that we had more people than we usually do which tripped us up a bit, but other than that, overall we were quite successful and we were able to communicate ideas well enough that it gave us an excellent film.

Tools for Working (Info & Media Literacy)

For this film, I used Celtx to create the script that we used for the film. As well as the Spider-man: No Way Home Script to use as a reference and guide. I also used The Visual Story Book by Bruce Block to learn about tone.

Ways of Living in the World (Life & Career)

This production taught me that working with a lot of people requires a lot more organization and communication.

Reactions to the Final Version

A comment I got from Michelle, was how she “appreciated how you spoke to the audience during the presentation, and how you used arrows and pictures of the shot to show your intention and where it was”

Self-Evaluation of Final Version

By the end of the production and presenting, I feel like as a screenwriter I did my job well while creating the script. Where I didn’t feel like I didn’t do my job was in the tone of the film. Overall I believe we created a creative, emotional and interesting film and I think that our team did an excellent job.

What I Learned and Problems I Solved

What I learned from this film was the difficulty of representing a story structure, while five other roles try to represent their own story structure as well. During this session, we had to deal with a much bigger group of people, requiring us to double up on roles. This caused a communication problem, where one person was manning the role, while the other wasn’t doing much. Eventually we found out a solution later into production after properly communicating.

Grammar and Spelling

Grammarly

Editor

Merja

Visual Story Structure Research

An old story i wrote about prison…“An old story i wrote about prison…” by jm3 is licensed under

Seven Visual Story Components

CueNotes
 lense settings?Space
Depth of field or lack thereof
 Line and Shape
Lines and shapes of composition can add meaning to the scene
ex. Placing a character in front of a square; represents how they’re boxed in like they’re trapped.
Lines help direct the eye
using light to emphasize
Shapes –> Silhouette
Lighting adds meaning, corresponding to the context
 How else can I control the tone through screenwriting?Tone
Find a subject to focus on, no movement =
color does not = tone
watch film in black and white to judge lighting work
hiding and revealing things
Communicating with other parts of the team to sculpt a tone
Controlling tone through the staging of film.
 Color
Orange and teal are the most used colors in film
orange = vibrancy
Teal = life
controls the feeling of the ambiance of the film
Time/location affects color pallet
 Movement
Create more intensity via movement
 Rhythm
timing of objects in the background + camera movement = rhythm
  

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